Oh god, this' so sad xD The art is amazing, especially the colors. My problems are that his movement is a bit too slow for me and the ladder would be better if there's a different animation for it, though I know that's hard to do in such little time, I'm just nitpicking really. Lastly, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way! I think it's best to have someone proof read your English, especially since it's a dialogue-heavy game. All in all great little game, definitely enjoyed it!
Thank you very much for your feedback! I am very glad that you liked the game. I asked for help with English, but when I received it, it was already deadline and I did not have time to make changes. If you point out any mistakes, I will be very grateful and will make a change to the postjam version.
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That was beautiful and yet heartbreaking. You certainly know how to craft a compelling narrative. Thank you for the game!
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A full story just in one jam. Wow!
Oh god, this' so sad xD The art is amazing, especially the colors. My problems are that his movement is a bit too slow for me and the ladder would be better if there's a different animation for it, though I know that's hard to do in such little time, I'm just nitpicking really. Lastly, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way! I think it's best to have someone proof read your English, especially since it's a dialogue-heavy game. All in all great little game, definitely enjoyed it!
Thank you very much for your feedback! I am very glad that you liked the game. I asked for help with English, but when I received it, it was already deadline and I did not have time to make changes. If you point out any mistakes, I will be very grateful and will make a change to the postjam version.
I don't mind proof reading it, if you'd like!
Loved it please make more of the game
and great job
Holy shit great stuff!
the intro is great finish the game am so excited to play it..
PLEASE FINISH THIS IT LOOK AMASING